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雅思写作考官范文 G类 Task1(建议信)

时间：2021-07-17 16:48:19

第2期:college cafeteria needs some improvements

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Youeatatyourcollegecafeteriaeverylunchtime.However,youthinkitneedssomeimprovements.Writealettertothecollegemagazine.Inyouletter1.explainwhatyoulikeaboutthecafeteria

2.saywhatiswrongwithit3.suggesthowitcouldbeimprovedWriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.Beginyourletterasfollows:Dear................. ,

Dear Sir/Madam,

尊敬的先生/女士，

I normally eat lunch at the college cafeteria because it is reasonable priced, convenient and it has a friendly atmosphere.

我通常在大学食堂吃午饭，因为它价格合理，方便，气氛友好。

There are, however, a number of deficiencies which I think should be put right Firstly, although the staff try to keep the tables clean, there are not enough workers at peak times to clear their tables themselves then they have finished eating.

然而，我认为有许多不足之处，我认为应该是正确的，尽管工作人员试图保持桌子干净，但没有足够的工人在高峰时间清理桌子，然后他们就吃完了。

Unfortunately, some students do not bother to do this. Also, there are a number of students who do not wait in the queue to be served, which is very annoying for the majority of us. Finally, I think the cafeteria could have better ventilation as it gets too hot, especially in the summer.

不幸的是，有些学生懒得这么做。另外，还有一些学生不排队等候服务，这对我们大多数人来说是非常恼人的。最后，我认为自助餐厅可以有更好的通风，因为它变得太热，特别是在夏天。

I think it would be a good idea if more signs were put around the cafeteria asking students to put their dirty plates and cutlery on the trolleys provided and to throw away their leftovers and rubbish. Also, I think we should tell students when they are being anti-social and jumping the queue. Finally, could we please have a few windows open when things get too hot?

我认为如果有更多的迹象摆在自助餐厅，要求学生把他们的脏盘子和餐具放在手推车上，扔掉他们的剩菜和垃圾，这是个好主意。另外，我认为我们应该告诉学生什么时候他们是反社会的，什么时候插队。最后，当天气太热时，我们能开几扇窗户吗？

Yours faithfully

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重点词汇

There are有;可数名词的复数形式;许多重要事情要谈

a number of许多的

put right纠正;更正

try to设法;试图;试着

they have他们有;他们刚点了吃的;他们在家吃早餐

wait in在家等候

good idea好主意;好点子;好想法

put around传播;散布