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初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导

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初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导

书面表达是初中生学习英语时应掌握的一项基本技能,它要求学生有扎实的语言基本功,具备一定的审题能力、想象能力、表达能力和评价能力等。今天我们来了解一下整个写作练习的流程是怎样的。

我们以下题为例:

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请根据以下信息,给Billy回封邮件,并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点:

1.你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试(physical test)做准备。

2.介绍你平时锻炼的情况:

(1)每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时

(2)偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业太多,没时间

(3)擅长的体育运动:球类运动

3.谈谈锻炼给你带了哪些好处。

1) 我们在每次练习写作文时都可以先列出会用到的词汇:

1.最近 recently/lately

2.正忙于 be busy doing sth

3.即将到来的 coming/upcoming

4.做准备 get prepared/prepare for

5.每周 weekly/each week/every week

6.花时间 spend a few hours on doing sth.

7.锻炼身体 work out someone’s body/do physical exercise

8.不到一个半小时 no more than 90 minutes

9.擅长的 be good at

10.球类运动 ball games

然后我们按照上次交给大家的结构去写:

段1:

It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. Recently, I am busy getting prepared for the coming physical test and I strongly recommend you to spend a few hours on working out your body.

1. recommend /rekmend/ 劝告;建议

开篇就用从句和高阶词汇勾住阅卷老师的眼球

段2:转入三项 半控制内容

过渡句:Actually, I have been a big fan of doing physical exercise for a long time, but now I begin to do it more frequently.

1. a big fan of ……的铁杆粉丝

2. frequent /frikw()nt/ adj. 频繁的;时常发生的;惯常的

半控制内容1:每天锻炼的时间:不到一个半小时

Everyday, I do exercise for no more than 90 minutes. For example, jogging, planking and pull-up.

(我给出了具体的训练项目有哪些)

半控制内容2:偶尔不锻炼的原因:作业太多,没时间

Although I have tried my best to do workout everyday, I sometimes have too much homework and no time left to work out my body.

(给出了具体原因,为什么没时间,而且用到了让步状语从句。)

半控制内容3:擅长的体育运动:球类运动

Among all the exercise, I especially love playing ball games, because I am really good at playing ball games. Just like you, my favorite is basketball.

(我再给出了具体项目是什么。并且加入情景:我最喜欢的是篮球跟Billy一样,让文章更加充实完整)

第三段:转入自由发挥的部分

过渡句:I have to say doing exercise has been really beneficial to me.

1. beneficial /benfl/ adj. 有益的,有利的;可享利益的 (to sb/sth)

[SYN] advantageous; favorable

A good diet is beneficial to health.

良好的饮食有益于健康。

原因1:

Firstly, I am becoming increasingly stronger day by day. This helps me avoid getting sick easily.

1. avoid /vd/ vt. 避免.

2. get sick 生病;患病

原因2:更具体,更充实。

Secondly, after the workout, I always eat more than usual. Now I am much taller than the average boys at my age. When I am tall enough and skilled enough, I will be a professional NBA player and I will invite you to my game.

1. more than usual 比平时多; 比平时更

2. professional /prfenl/ adj. 专业的;职业的

结尾:

I hope my dream will come true and meet you in American soon.

(比较通用的结尾,表达了作者对未来的美好期待。)

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